Personal Statement

If you ever wondered (I did before) how does the personal statement look like, which could get you to top universities here is one. I am not saying it is perfect or that you should copy it. I am sure somebody in your circle is currently searching for one as inspiration. Well, to be honest, I just wrote about myself focusing on the academic performance and to the field I wish to study. That's all. Honesty and integrity is the key. (and proof read it with your student counselor). 


Personal statement

Notable party leaders fighting for the vox populi during the day, while their nightlife represents immoral shadows. Democratic leaders sponsored by oligarchs; business agenda created to benefit a privileged few. This reflection of my dissatisfaction with the political landscape in my home country Slovakia has increased my ambition to become an academic in Social Science. I wish to better understand how economics influences politicians' decision-making and the cause of corruption through studying international relations.

My interest in politics was sparked by my first internship. I was responsible for the back-office operations at the Indian Chamber of Commerce in the Slovak Republic. I have worked closely with the president of the Chamber, Mr. Rakesh Taurani, who hired me, and the former Slovak ambassador to India, Egypt, and China Mr. Zigmund Bertok. This was a wonderful experience; I learned the beauty of negotiation in the political field, to improve my critical thinking, and to solve any task that was needed. Furthermore, it was also my first insight to the many different areas of government corruption. For example, how high state figures are known for money laundering, or networking contacts for illegitimate gain. Although those are only allegations, I started to see how numerous party leaders are less than honest and try only fill their pockets. It fed my curiosity and made me continue to interest about the topic more.

The greatest experience for me and one that highlights my hard work are, the several trips to India with the Slovak member companies to Indian Chamber. My job was to take meeting minutes from different appointments with generals or state ministers to later present them to the president of the Chamber. This is where my research and public speaking became a strength. To ask the right question related to the issue, I had to be knowledgeable about the topics being discussed. Joining debates between the important figures has given me skills I can confidently apply during my bachelor's studies. It was an amazing insight into how global affairs contribute to the well-being of a country.

In my spare time, I enjoy reading books covering Czechoslovakia's recent history of democratic changes in society and the role of leaders. For my big project at my American high school, my main source was a book called "Mečiar a Mečiarizmus" by Marián Leško. I wrote a research paper covering how significant Vladimir Mečiar was in the development of the post-communist Slovak state. I found this intriguing in two ways: first, how two countries can separate without a war; second, a transition from corporate planning approach to liberal democracy with the market economy in the middle of the EU. I must acknowledge that he managed the separation without a bloody war, however, former Prime Minister Mečiar is a great example of oligarchs and mafia, setting the groundwork for future corruption. I also like to be involved in the community.

In 2020, I organised a charity clothing bazaar. The point was to donate the money earned to an orphanage to make a better environment for the kids who do not have the privileges of family. I faced challenges that could ruin the whole operation, but with the best team around me, we brainstormed new ideas and solved inconveniences within one session. Being the leader of the event was an incredible journey I have undertaken. It further developed my passion to become a hard-working woman. My 10 years spent training hard on a tennis court and winning many national tournaments, only supports my ambitions, whether in school, life, or work.

I wish to continue my education in such a dynamic field because the options offered by social sciences feed both my interest and analytical thinking. I will also have the chance to meet like-minded people who share my passion for solving political issues. My motivation, and ability to acquire new information will guide me as I learn more complex aspects of the subject.

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